Been reading about the latest mid-life sitcom, Weeds.
This is probably terribly unprofessional, but I am concerned you are finding my first draft writing a bit ragged. I've been working on Chapter 7 and it's so much tighter, I hope you don't mind me resubmitting.
Best wishes, A
No problem Amanda. Having a manic week so haven't had a chance to read your manuscript yet. I'll print off this version!
Thanks and best wishes,
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